I was a bit shocked, cos as far as I'm concern, I never got a poem from a guy. I didn't know what to say, so I simply told him "nice". Believe it or not, at first I thought it was a lyrics of a song LOL.
I am the cloud
Nothing you see about
Dancing ghost in your heart
Near you yet apart
I am the wind
The very air you breathe
Feel me yet none can see
My dwell come and go free
I am the fire
I am your burning desire
I shall give you warmth
Yet near me you be charred
I am the water
Flowing in destiny forever
You need me to live
Yet I drown you complete
Without me you shan’t be
Be with me you might be
Shall you chance the un-be
To leave the forever not be
Btw, below is my song-of-the-moment:
Shall I be addicted to you?
awww..that is a very sweet and touching poem!!! girl!!! he's a keeper...? is he? hehee
ReplyDeleteNikki, unfortunately he's not a keeper LOL!
ReplyDeleteAlthoug i'm a man... I should admit that it's a very good poem...
ReplyDeleteWish to make on of those to my lovely one, someday... *sigh*